こんにちは。英語コーチの内藤です。

英検プライベートクラスで、受講生に毎回渡しているモデルエッセーです。

私が英検で点数を稼げるエッセンスを入れながら書いたものです。

英米豪加＋アイリッシュのネイティブが毎回チェックしていますので、文法、語彙、構成も間違いないです。皆さまのお役に立てば、と思って公開しています。

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Has technology changed education for the better?

An increasing number of people are getting benefits in education /because of the advent of technology such as computers.　It has changed education for the better.  There are three reasons which support this idea.

Firstly, computers make it easier to find a lot of information at home as well as at school.  Students do not need to go to the library or ask teachers / if they come across some questions.   Now, they can gather information to study just / by clicking the mouse.  It is not necessary to search information for a long period of time.   As a result, computers encourage them to be curious about variety of things and study more.

Secondly, iPhone plays a significant role in education.  The small device is so easy to use /and it is at the same time / equipped with different kinds of applications which could be used anytime, anywhere.  Thus, they can use their spare time effectively.   For example, it is useful for us / especially in memorizing English words, reading and listening to an English application during commuting time.

Finally, the on-line education system provides students with a broader opportunity.         We had education disparities between students in urban areas and rural ones.  However, now, there is no so much difference between them.    Actually, even if students who would like to pass Tokyo University live on a remote island, it is possible to take a lecture by eminent teachers through the Internet.

Conclusively, as mentioned above, technology has changed education for the better for these reasons.  It makes students possible to find a lot of information for a short period of time through the Internet, they could study effectively and equally have the chance to study.